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How I Will Succeed in School Writing Example - This example is meant to be
instructional. It is not meant to be a template to use to simply change certain parts to
make it yours.
Outline:
1.
My full name: David Martocchio
2.
The title of my piece: Three Things
3.
Date: September 5, 2025
4.
My Subtopics:
1.
I need chocolate to succeed in school.
2.
I need a wave pool to succeed in school.
3.
I need to avoid smiling to succeed in school.
Photo Credits:
Cover Page:
https://www.surfertoday.com/surfi ng/surf-lakes-the-unique-concentric-wave-pool-
technology
This is The Introduction Draft:
I have found that I only need three things to ensure that I do well in school. The fi rst
and most important thing I need to succeed in school is chocolate. I also need a wave
pool to do well in school. The last thing I need is to have a frown on my face. If I have
these three things, it will be a good year.
This is The Topic One Paragraph
Draft
:
More than anything, I need chocolate in school. Chocolate wakes me up in the
morning. Chocolate gives me me energy. Chocolate is the perfect reward that I give
myself when I fi nish some work or do a good job on a test. Chocolate keeps me focused
on my work because I know that I can have some if I am doing my work. Chocolate
makes me feel good. Therefore, chocolate is the number one thing I need to do well in
school.
This is The Topic Two Paragraph
Draft
:
I need a wave pool to do well in school. I have found that if I take breaks from my work
to surf in the wave pool I feel better, rejuvenated, and ready to get back to my school work.
Being in the water is refreshing to me. Surfi ng helps me get my extra energy out so I can
sit sill to do my work. Surfi ng in a wave pool for recess, lunch, and P.E. is very important
for me to do well in school.
This is The Topic Three Paragraph
Draft
:
The last thing I need to do well in school is to keep a frown on my face. If I am happy
and joking around, I don’t get my work fi nished. Instead of smiling, I frown to keep me
from joking around. Frowning puts me into a serious mood, and that makes me more
focused on getting my work fi nished. Frowning is important to having a good school year.
GRANT SCHOOL
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Offi ce
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Dave P. Martocchio
InstructorDave@me.com
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Mobile: 858-354-9417
FOR INSTRUCTIONAL PURPOSES
ONLY. DO NOT COPY.
This is The Summary
Draft
:
In summary, I need only three things to ensure a good school year. First, and most
importantly, I need chocolate to keep me focused and rewarded. Then I need a wave pool
to surf in to get my energy out at recess. Lastly, I need to keep a frown on my face to put
me in the right mood to get my work done. I know that if I have chocolate, surf in the wave
pool, and keep frowning, I will succeed in school this year.
FOR INSTRUCTIONAL PURPOSES
ONLY. DO NOT COPY.
